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Commission for *AgentWhiteHawk of her characters Jenn and Jayson in their canine forms. The rifle there is Jayson's (hopefully it looks similar to one!)
This particular scene is in in her Marvel fanfic "Confession" that can be read here: [link]

Anyways, below is my version of the final scene in "Confession", except written in my style. Enjoy!

After rushing into a nearby building, Jayson paused. He was on the third floor, and could hear deep, gasping breaths close by. Taking care to take light steps, he approached one of the closest rooms with the door partly open. With gun in hand and at the ready, he slowly nudged the door open with his arm.

“Jenn?” He whispered.
No answer- all but the slow painful breaths that led him there.
The room was dimly lit, and it took a few moments for his eyes to adjust. It was then he saw her. Jenn, hanging by handcuffs, from a large pipe that expanded across the length of the ceiling. He almost dropped his weapon in shock.

“Oh my gosh, Jenn!” He gasped. He noticed a chair in one corner of the room, and quickly pulled it beneath her suspended body. After climbing onto it, and putting away his weapon, he reached up and pulled a tool from his belt. With this, he easily picked the lock until a loud ‘click’ had Jenn fall straight into his arms with a pained groan. He pulled her limp body as gently as he could onto the floor and placed her head on his lap. She was covered in grazes and wounds, but Jayson immediately focused on the large bullet wound in Jenn’s shoulder, surrounded with dark, dried blood.

He grabbed Jenn’s hand tightly between both of his. “Jenn! Jenn, can you hear me? Jenn, please, wake up…”
Tears began to flow down his cheeks as his words became sobs. It was impossible to control his heavy breaths. He forced himself to hold his breath when he heard Jenn stirring.
“Jay..son,” she coughed, her voice hoarse.
“Jenn!” He beamed, hugging her tightly. “Are you hurt?”
Jenn shook her head slowly. “You… rescued me? But you’re working with them.”
“No, you’re wrong, I never was.” Jayson smiled through his streaming tears.
Jenn looked towards the gaping door. “Where are they?”
“I killed them. Every last one.” He said in a more sombre tone. “But I’m so glad you’re safe.” He hugged her even more tightly this time.

“Jayson, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears began to flow quickly from her eyes like a river. “I’m so sorry.”
Jayson shook his head. “Um, you… you do know I meant what I said before, right?”
“I know,” Jenn whispered, moving her face closer to his. “I love you.”
“I know.” Jayson smiled, pressing his lips against hers in a passionate kiss and pulling her close.
When they both parted with a sigh, Jenn looked up at him with a smile, her tears finally drying. “Hey, Jayson?”
“Yeah?” He replied, returning her smile.
“Can we keep our re-established relationship to, well, ourselves?”
Jayson laughed. “Sure, Jenn.” He said, pulling her closer. “I’m never going to let anyone hurt you again.”
Jenn leaned further into his embrace. “I know you won’t.”

Jenn, Jayson (c) *AgentWhiteHawk
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:iconnadasi:
Nadasi Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Mr. and Mrs. Smith, eh? :D
Wonderful detailing and colours!
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FreeSpirit90 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this so much!! Well done!
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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FreeSpirit90 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome!
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Windyfeather Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love those blood stains and shading <3
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankyou! C:
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BTW, forgot to tell you, it might not have been as obvious on the sketchy ref, but Jayson has a goatee. ^ ^
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did a quick edit and changed the deviation file. Hopefully it looks more like he has a goatee now. xD
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep, little bit. Thanks ^ ^
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh geez, he does too! Sorry about that. ;n;
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem. I'm definitely going to commission you again, so just a heads up!
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dragonkiba1202 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
oh very nice and beautiful !! =)
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankyou! c:
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Naragirl007 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Geez! Those colors in the fur, I can't get over it! >< Your work is so beautiful, it's never monotonous. This seems like a new one for you though, a wounded shot. I dunno, there's something just really cool about it. And see? Your writing is awesome! I knew it was! XD
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's true, I don't think i've drawn many wounds before. My art is generally... quite happy. xD
I guess I might just have to draw some more dark stuff, I guess? xD

I don't know if you can call it awesome. xD Still needs a bit of work. xP
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Naragirl007 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But of course! It can't be rainbows and butterflies all the time! XD

Meh, I think writing is all a matter of opinion. Like music, it's subjective. I could think your writing was awesome the way it was, while someone else could think of it as sloppy. Or as you think, it needs more work. Y'know? ;P And as always I think you're just too modest. Of course, practice never hurts anything. Perfection (or even satisfaction) is a hard point to reach when writing. Trust me. I've been working on a story for almost two years now, and I know I'm going to have to start over from scratch and write it over again in a better way. But then, after I finish that write up, will I think that IT is now naive and childish as I think my draft is now? It's a freakin' endless cycle. O.<
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, yep. x3

Like how 90% of the world thinks the Twilight books are works of art and 10% (including me) think they're terrible? xD
I couldn't even count the amount of words Meyer used to describe Edward's beauty. It was dictionary rape in some cases. Some words I didn't even know existed until I googled them. xD

Ahh, I know the feeling. I started writing my story with Aaron and Kayla when I was 15 or 16, so the beginning of it needs to be either re-written or drastically improved. It's like you are never able to call a book complete unless you finish the whole thing within a year of starting it or your style might change multiple times throughout. Dl
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Naragirl007 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Psh, Twilight isn't literature. It's shameless sickening romance that's drawn too much attention. Notice how things turned out perfect in the end, and she didn't actually have to choose? She got both Jacob AND Edward, to an extent! (My English teacher and I fight off all the bloodthirsty fangirls of my grade with our logic, but they still insist that it's godliness between two covers. ><) Or even her LACK of creativity in describing him sometimes. Yes, we get it for the fiftieth time, he's like cold marble. -_- Second verse, same as the first.

Ah, exactly! The story I'm referencing is the one with Ryuko, Saiko, and Satoshi. (I don't know. Maybe you haven't seen them. *shrug* That might have been when you still weren't getting my deviations. XD) Anyway, it is so patchy that reading through it can be painful sometimes. I feel like completing a rewrite in a year would be the ONLY way I'd be satisfied with my work. :/
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeahh, not a very good way of telling a story at all. A friend of mine pretty much forced me to borrow them, read them, then talk to her about it because no one else had read it yet (this was before the series was insanely popular). I pretty much told her that it was "okay" (total opposite of what I was actually thinking, but I didn't want to make her feel bad. xD).

I know those characters of yours! After I fixed the whole "not seeing you deviations", I went through your gallery to see what I missed. xD
Haha, better get writing- er, I mean rewriting that story then. xP
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Naragirl007 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy endings like that are a bit sickening, I won't lie to you. "We had all these things trying to kill us and tear our relationship apart, but now we survived, we are living happily, and even those that once hated us are our friends!" Gross. Everyone likes a good sad ending sometimes. There aren't enough of them, really. :/ That was nice of you though. I'm so blunt that people commonly don't want to hear my opinion, because they know I'm not going to sugar-coat it at all. XD

Oh cool! :D I'm happy you took the time to do that. Really! ^^
Aw, but its such a choooore- *groan* ><
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeaahhh, that's a terrible ending. At least have some enemies still, you know?
It's sometimes hard to kill off characters, but sometimes these things must happen for a good story. I know the feeling, though, I know that feeling... ;n;

Hmm, I think all the stories i've read have had happy endings... wait. The Book Thief was fairly mixed in that regard, and very sad. Have you read that one? (One of my favourites~) Other than that, I can't recall any others.

Not a problem! I enjoyed going through all I missed. xP
But these things must be done sometime, my friend!
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MagicWolfSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your art are the best thing ^^
It's a honor for me ask to you a comment ^^
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, thankyou! ;u;
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MagicWolfSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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Elyck Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
This is Amazing!!!!!! :D
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! ;u;
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, just read the story in your form, WOW It's amazing! I love the way you did it! I look farward to commisssioning you again the future! XD
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And now you can tell how different our writing styles are. xD
But it was definitely a lot of fun! It's one of my hobbies to re-write scenes from novels and books in my own style... xD
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Coo. I really loved the way you did it. It made it more tense and realistic! XD
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AgentWhiteHawk Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's awesome! Thank you so much! Perfect <333
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Nightwhisper29 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it!!!!
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Nightwhisper29 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no prob!
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Darkaiya Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this looks amazing!!

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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much! ;u;
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Darkaiya Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
sure thing!!
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DuskyTheWusky Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yawww, is beautiful,,,
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The-Nutkase Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankyou! ^-^
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